John Smith: What Could Possibly Go Wrong?, 3 Old Monks, PBH Free Fringe, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

Smith is a likeable Geordie, who tells us immediately that his show has no overriding storyline, but is simply an hour of jokes and anecdotes, with the emphasis on dark humour.  Nevertheless he did mange to fit in a call back as part of his routine.  It's a slightly shambolic hour, but none the worse for that, although it gets a bit too slow paced at times.  His audience interaction is deent enough, and there are some pretty good jokes in there.  Dark?  Yes, quite often, sometimes to the point of feeling old fashioned,  but there's enough laughs in there to feel like this was time well spent.

He also has a guest making a brief appearance with her own routine - Very someone?  I didn't catch the name.  Very rushed, almost embarrassed by her own performance, and a bit weird...

In Loyal Company, Pleasance, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

 Actor and stand up David  William Bryan plays his great-uncle, Arthur 'Joe' Robinson, in a (mostly) true story.  Joe is a young man in Birkenhead in 1939.  He has a job.  And there's a girl in his life (almost).  But experiencing a Luftwaffe bomb attack on the Liverpool area dirves him to join the army.  He's trained, shipped about, and ends up heading for the Fra East, only for his ship to be sunk by Japanese bombers.  Rescued, and taken on to Singapore... just as the island is foreced to surrender.  Robinson has to endure 4 years as a POW, working as lave labour, seriously ill, his fellow prisoners dying.  But he survives, just, and finally makes it home.  What kind of life can he expect?

Bryan portrays this in dramatic and energetyiuc fashion, with several on stage costume changes, and giving voice to host of peoplein Joe's life.  He does a good job of bringing across the horrors of war, has his characters well deliniated, and there's a clear narrative arc.  He even manages to work a few laughs into a very sad subject.  The performance deserved the standing ovation he received in the end, if only for the physical toll each perfomance must take on his body.  

It's good to see a war story that is not about sucess of glory, but simply celebrates survival.

Mark Watson: Sometimes People Are Being Over-Cautious When They Say Work-In-Progress, But This Truly Is Rough, Stand 3, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

It might be a WIP, but the structure was clear and the show hilarious.  It centres on a tale of Mark's inability to stand up to a debt collector, despite a mistaken identity being involved.  Along the way are featured taking Nelson Mandela to Brighton, a non-appearance on Question Time, the politics of Kashmir, a donkey, and numerous other digressions.  

Watson is likeable, open, self-deprecating, and persistently funny.  He can smoothly riff off a bit of audience interaction, but keeps it minimal, concentrating on his material.  A very enjoyable hour.

Susan Morrison: Swearing, Shit and Shagging - Scotland's Filthy History, Stand 4, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

 Morrison is well known on the Edinburgh, and Scotland, comedy scene, but also as writer and broadcaster. More importantly for this show, she's also an enthusiastic historian, often focusing on the seedier aspects of society. So this is a show that's not only entertaining, but informative.

She takes us through Scotland's massive contribution, real and apocryphal, to the worlds of swearing sex and bodily functions, complete with on-screen illustrations, at a rapid pace. And she answers the big questions like how did women manage to have a shit whilst wearing a crinoline, and what sort of activities did Edinburgh's 'gentlemen' get up to when left to their own devices? There's even a bit of audience participation to illustrate the former...

Fast, filthy and funny. And excellent.

Tomatoes Tried to Kill Me, but Banjos Saved My Life, Summerhall, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

Can a show ever live up to such an eye-catching title? Keith Alessi is from an Italian American family,so tomatoes played a bit part in his family life. He was also, from a young age, a fan of bluegrass music, especially the sound of the banjo. But an early attempt to play the instrument soon ended in failure. He want on to have a successful career in business, which came to a halt with a sudden illness (in part doe to all those tomatoes...) that would change his life completely, and revive that banjo playing desire.

It's an interesting story, which he tells well, interspersed by his now-competent banjo playing and a hilarious moment of puppetry. And there's a moral to the tale too, as he discovered the concept of 'enough', an important step in life. But. There's a self-satisfied air about his delivery that can grate at times. It's enjoyable, interesting, and there's some great music playing a times, but there was always that 'but'...

The Kingmaker, Pleasance, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

Advertised as a Work in Progress, and the unfinished nature of the piece was strongly emphasised by the performer ('Mouse') before she began. This will end up being a much longer performance when completed, so this was only the first half. Despite which...

This is a fascinating hour and only left me wanting more. Mouse is a charismatic performer and is sure to be engaging once the show has some polish applied. It's her tale of joining, belonging to, and eventually leaving, a religious cult in the US. That fascination comes from her explanation of how ordinary people can be attracted into these movements, and then persuaded to stay. She went willingly, stayed willingly, and... well, sadly, it's how she left that is the big missing element. And one of several reasons why I sincerely hope that The Kingmaker, in it's completed form, is back for Fringe '27.  

Churchill's Urinal, EICC, Edinburgh Festival Fringe

Rosie Holt has built up a huge online following in recent years with her sharp parody videos of a Tory MP character.  Good satire walks hands in hand wirth reality and perhaps her biggest tribute is from the huge number of people fooled into thinking she was the real thing.

This play takes that original format, and twists the character into a Labour MP who becomes the first female Chancellor of the Exchequer (with apologies to Rachel Reeves!), and picks up on a real life fact and plays with the idea that it could turn into a viral incident.  In the Chancellor's en suite is urinal, a symbol of the patriarchy she'd prefer to do without.  But there's a problem. Churchill used to piss there so would it be an insult to national hero if it were to be removed?

The story is leaked, an interview ends badly, and immediately the media turns on her, along with the full propaganda force of the far right's social media, whipping up a frenzy of fake 'patriotism'. A Chancellor under siege. And a talking urinal, as the old war leader speaks from both grave and porcelain, along with a few other voices. Is there a strategy to turn things around?

The basic premise is sound enough, but this isn't sharp satire I had hoped for. Although sprinkled with contemporary references, there's an old fashioned feel to the script, descending into farce at times. Some of the humour seems laboured (pun intended), it's rarely hilarious.

It's certainly not all bad though. There's an effective attack on the hagiographical mythologising of WC, who truly was a racist alcoholic, and an effective demonstration of the power of social media to blow everything out of perspective. Plus a few decent jokes, especially the one about Fabricant. Holt's performance is energetic, and engages with her audience, but tends towards the chaotic at times. There's excellent support from Michael Lambourne as the vocal urinal and other voices.

Maybe it was the expectation of something akin to her viral hits that left me feeling disappointed, but I was left with the impression that a solid ten to fifteen minute sketch had been stretched a bit too far...